Saturday, June 9, 2007

(WAR) Man down

My life does a passing
as i lid it thrice
in pain.

My breath soaked
in full colour
-Raw

Pungence puddled around me,
for the ground i lay on ,
is saturated with the pain
of all my kind.

I see those eyes.
Gazing down
-Glistening.

1 comment:

Gunjeet Sra said...

nah..okay...i'll just give u a fair on this one..u can do better...